Dargquon Ql'deleodna

oh so true, yet hard to build strong foundations.

wow, that is so true, to me it seems, but i think thats fine and you dont need any expansion , wow :cry:

this is a really cool story, very nice plot, it seems just a little like lord of the rings, any way good job, im waiting to read more of this ...

this remimded me alot of the shoe making elves childrens fairy tale, just more fleshed out, i like it this way better, it good, i like it, and as ohhewwo ...

this was a very beautifull poem jack, really, really good job, i like the way the poem fit together, it was nice :)

this is really weird, a bit fast and confuzing..

this is really good, a bit confuzing but i think i got the picture, it would be nice if your were a bit more descriptive, or posted more of the ...

My life for a thrill, Show me that fun, Doesn’t come in a pill, i swear those exact lines are in a poem i read

this was coool, yet creepy, i liked it..

this was good, yet it moved a bit fast..

holy swiss cheese*slaps forehead* this was hmmmmm.. whats a good word to describe it,AWSOME!!!!!! really good job, and really good ending...

this was really good, forget what brad said, he just like to put people down, he likes being mean, forget him...

good job, i liked this, it showed much felling expression, how about the title of the thread for the title, thats what caught my attention...

sure

uhh, did you see my post just before yours? cuz if you didnt i have a suggestion in it..